Carta de Olvido

Otoña la tarde mi corazón

se borran de mi memoria tus nombres y voces

caen en picada los días del calendario de nuestro amor

se deshojan los árboles que plantamos en nuestras almas

se secan los ríos de nuestras lágimas

se arrugan los labios de nuestros besos

se desvanecen las fotografías tomadas en la plaza del pueblo

descuajan el asiento que hicimos nuestro

ebrios caballos galopan en la noche de despedida

risas cuadradas se hilan y trenzan

voces encerradas mumuran adiós.

Te vas, me fuiste

me voy, te fui.

Recibe mis palabras últimas

ilegibles e inpronunciables

mientras los párpados del día se cierran

para darnos la noche más negra de todas

la noche del olvido.

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se me rompio el corazon

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Si digo que fusite "Tú" suena raro por decir lo menos, asi que dire esto que has escrito me rompio el corazon, en especial :

 

"Recibe mis palabras últimas

ilegibles e inpronunciables

mientras los párpados del día se cierran

para darnos la noche más negra de todas

la noche del olvido."

 

 

como el ocaso de un amor...

 

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por que dices eso? yo tuve uno que fue un verddero amanecer? alguna fisura ?-----------------

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pero ellos mismos pueden volver a repuntar con el alba?-----------------

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NUnca es igual--- Algo fisuró la copa que lo envolvia inicalmente.. el motivo siempre estará vigente para crear temor.-

Un abrazo----------------

Desde mi rincón Venezolano...  María Lasalete Marques

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